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Family Unit Can Be Preserved Through Various Means

By:
Nor Hazlina Bt. Abdullah Thani, Rabiatul Adawiah Bt. Ramli
Heng Cheng Kar and Lim Pei Sin

In nowadays, the myriad of social problems are caused by family issue. As a example, the teenagers will leave from house because they have argument with their parents or the parents disagree with their opinion. The teenagers feel angry and disappointed so that they leave their home stay with their friends. Therefore, we need to take some action to solve this problems such as teenagers need more communicate with their parents, spend more quality time with family members and through counseling. Firstly, good communicate between parents and teens is the very best way to preserved family units. According to a recent survey, most parents and their teens spend less than an hour a day talking to each other. It will bear up on the relationship between parents and teens. Teenagers and parents are receiving information about knowledge from movies, television, music, magazines and the Internet that give them conflicting messages. From data, rape to sexually transmitted diseases, teens’ health and safety have never been more at risk. Secondly, parents can spend more quality time with their children. During the holidays, a family can plan to go out . Such as go to picnic at beach, it will close their relationship between family units. Besides, parents also can try to stay at home when Sunday to teach their children about academic or theory . Parents also must always spend more time go to school when school have meeting PIBG or any activities if want parents to participate . Besides that, teenagers also want to listen anything about their parents say. Because all parents want their children do the best and have a good future time. Lastly, at school, teachers also have to teach students how to respect parents. Besides teaching knowledge about academic, teachers also can teach student about how to do the best when at home. Such as help mother wash the glass, help father wash the car or help sister to care the flowers. School also can do the activities to increase the relationship between parents and teens. Example activities are competition jogging ,singing and drawing that one family take part . Besides that, government also have to take part in the academic, such as educations about moral and religion. All in all, family units can be preserve though various means such as communications, spend more quality time with family and educations. So if we do the best all this step, the family problem will be decrease faster.



“Illegal cyber cafes mushrooming in the city need to be controlled because they encourage gambling and cause social problems among teenagers”

by
FATEEN BINTI RAMLI
NOR FAZLIN BINTI ARIFFIN
HIKMALINY BINTI HINDWAN
NOR DIANA BINTI HAMSI

I agree with the statement of illegal cyber cafe mushrooming in the city need to controlled because they encourage gambling and cause social problem among teenagers. It is because this bring a many problem to school, parents and government. Teenagers always use internet in cyber cafe in the city. So many illegal cyber cafe in the city. This problems happen because of the government not control to uses the internet, parents not given full attention to their children, and the government not carry out the punishment.

Firstly, this problems happen because of the government not controlled to uses the internet by teenagers. When the government not controlled, the teenagers can download video pornography such as youtube,picture or games to gambling with their friends. When the teenagers download any video, they must share with their friends via bluetooth.This situation can cause a many social problem among teenagers.

Secondly, parents not give full attention to their children. They doesn’t spend time to their children. Because of that, the children especially the teenagers must bored and make decision to spend their time at cyber cafe and search internet. If their search the positive thing, it's ok but their like to waste their time search the negative thing such as games, video and so on.

Lastly, the government not carry out this punishment to the teenagers how make the mistake. Besides that, government has not make the punishment with overall and cause this thing issue are not serious and they not scare with the punishment.This will make illegal cyber cafes.

In conclusion, all authorities must give cooperate to solve this problems. The government must carry out the law for make sure this problems will over. Parents must take their children's and spend some time with their children to make their children will not bored and feel lonely and not waste their time with unbenefied internet access.
ILLEGAL CYBERCAFES MUSHROOMING IN THE CITY NEED TO BE CONTROLED BECAUSE THEY ENCOURAGE GAMBLING AND CAUSE SOCIAL PROBLEMS AMONG TEENAGERS


By
KHAIRUL HAIRIZMAN BIN AHMAD MUHED
ABDUL HADIE BIN ABDUL HALIM
MUHAMMAD ZAHIN BIN MUHAMMAD RUSNI
MUHAMMAD ASYWAD BIN SAPINGAI


NOWADAYS,PARENTS TODAY ARE WORRIED THAT THEIR CHILDRENS HAVE BEEN INFLUENCED NEGATIVELY BY THE DEVELOPMENT OF INFORMATION AND COMMUNICATION TECHNOLOGY.IT ALSO BECOME WORSE BECAUSE MANY ILLEGAL CYBERCAFES MUSHROOMING IN THE CITY AND ONE OF FACTORS CAUSE SOCIAL PROBLEMS.CAN WE IMAGINE THAT WE LIFE WITHOUT INTERNET?CAN WE STOP ILLEGAL CYBERCAFES FROM MUSHROOMING IN EVERYWHERE?YESTERDAY,WHEN I GO TO THE TOWN.I SAW MANY STUDENT WEAR SCHOOL UNIFORM COME OUT FROM CYBERCAFES AND SMOKING AT STAIRS.HOW I COULD TO STOP THEM??

FIRSTLY,PARENTS SHOULD TO CONTROL THEIR CHILDREN AND MONITOR THE ACTIVITIES PREVENT THEIR CHILDRENS INFLUENCED WITH ILLEGAL CYBERCAFES MISUSE.MANY TEENAGERS INFUENCE WITH PORNOGRAPHY WHERE THEY CAN SEARCH AT INTERNET.THEY CAN EASILY GET OR WATCH THE PRONOGRAPHY VIDEOS,PICTURES,AND STORY BY USING INTERNET.IN INTERNET,NO OBSTACLES OR DIFFICULTY FOR USER ESPECIALLY TEENAGERS TO DOWNLOAD PORNOGRAPHY THINGS FROM YOUTUBE AND THEY CAN WATCH BY HANDPHONE,MP4,ALSO IPOD ANYWHERE OR ANYTIME.THIS MATTER CAN CAUSE THEIR CHILDRENS INFLUENCE WITH BAD THINGS,SO PARENTS MUST CHECK OR OBSERVE THEIR CHILDRENS BEHAVIOUR FROM KEEP OR WATCH PORNOGRAPHY.

SECONDLY,TEACHERS MUST DISTRICT PENALTY TO STUDENT IF THEY CAUGHT AT ILLEGAL CYBERCAFES DURING SCHOOL TIME.MOSTLY,IF THE STUDENTS TRUANT DURING SCHOOL TIME AND GO TO CYBERCAFES THEIR ACTIVITIES IS LOAFING,SMOKING,AND PLAYING GAMES.IT CAN CAUSE THE STUDENTS CANNOT STUDIES AND INVOLVED IN SOCIAL PROBLEMS.IT CAN INFLUENCE THEIR EXAMINATION RESULTS AND DISAPPOINTED THEIR PARENTS HOPES.TEACHERS MUST ADVISE OR CAUNSELING ALL STUDENTS HAS BREAKING SCHOOL RULES SUCH AS TRUANT AND GO TO ILLEGAL CYBERCAFES ALSO GIVE PUNISHMENT TO THEM.

GOVERNMENT AUTHORITIES COMMIT THE OFFENCES.SO,ILLEGAL CYBERCAFES LESS TO DO OPERATION.IT CAN MAKE ILLEGAL CYBERCAFES BECOME LESS AND DON’T DO OPERATION EXTRA TIME ARE LIMITED.POLICE MUST CONDUCTED ENFORCEMENT OPERATION TO CAUGHT STUDENT UNDER AGES 18 AMONG THE CUSTOMERS AT ILLEGAL CYBERCAFES TO DISCOURAGE STUDENTS FROM GAMBLING.THE GOVERNMENT SHOULD TAKE AND SEAL OFF ALL OUTLETS AND PREMISES ILLEGAL CYBERCAFES ALSO INFLICT COMPOUND.

EVENTHOUGH,CYBERCAFES HAS A LOT OF DISADVANTAGES ESPECIALLY TO TEENAGERS,IT ALSO HAVE A LOT OF BENEFITS.IT IS ACTUALLY UP TO YOU WHETHER TO MISUSE IT OR NOT.ALL AUTHORITIES MUST TEAM WORK TO CONTROL THIS ILLEGAL CYBERCAFES FROM MUSHROOMING IN CITY BECAUSE IT CAN ENCOURAGE GAMBLING ALSO SOCIAL PROBLEMS.